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考研英语作文辅导书-中考英语作文辅导10:My good friend

发布时间:2018-01-29 所属栏目:学历考试

一 : 中考英语作文辅导10:My good friend

  中考英语作文辅导10:My good friend
  I.习作要求:
  李华是你的好朋友,请根据下面的文字提示写一篇以My good friend为题的短文。100词左右。
  提示:1. 李华1989年5月10日生于上海,现在在育英中学二年一班学习。他的父母都是教师,而且工作很努力。
  2.李华是班里个子最高的,他擅长打篮球。在所有的学科中,他的英语最好。他在班里是最懂礼貌的,经常帮助别人,因此,老师和同学都很喜欢他。在家里,他经常帮助父母做家务活儿,父母也帮他复习功课,他们互相帮助。
  3.李华是学校最好的学生之一,我们应该向他学习。
  II. 学生习作:
  

  III. 总评: 
  本文作者抓住了提示作文的写作特点,写出了许多的成功的句子,在最高级、动词时态等方面运用的较好,出错较少,尽管在词语用法方面出现一些小小的错误,但并不影响全篇。综观全文,语言地道、语义连贯、句子富于变化。这是一篇很好的作文,希望小作者继续努力,力争写出更好的作文来。

二 : 中考英语作文辅导11:介绍网友

  中考英语作文辅导11:介绍网友
  I.习作要求:
  Sandy是你的一名网友,根据她的基本情况写一则介绍她的文章,不得少于60词。
  Sandy:生于1992年,13岁,中文名Liu Jia,2000年从美国来到中国,现为希望中学一年级学生,已交了许多中国朋友;她漂亮、健康,大眼睛,戴副眼镜,身材苗条;爱唱歌、跳舞,擅长数学、英语、游泳和自然,和同学们相处融洽,大家都喜欢她。
  II. 学生习作:
  
  III. 总评:
  这是一则人物介绍,开篇便点明主题,语言简洁。在描写的过程中,作者善于抓住人物的特征来展开,说明较细腻,不仅说明了人物的外貌特征,还介绍了人物的性格、爱好。使读者对其所介绍的人物有较为全面的了解。语言流畅,不失为一篇较好的文章。

三 : 中考英语作文辅导8:A Christmas Present

  中考英语作文辅导8:A Christmas Present
  一、 习作要求
  以A Christmas Present为题,写一篇短文,主题不限,但必须具有真情实感,100个单词以上。
  二、 学生习作
 

  三、 教师总评
  全文以 "礼物"为线索,按时间顺序正面说明了"我"的好玩及好美,从侧面展现了弟弟的好学。本文最后一句弟弟的话,正是文章的主题所在。全文想象新颖,叙事清楚。说明小作者的语言素质较强,基本功扎实。

四 : 专家辅导:07年高考英语作文的一些实用技巧

      (一)掌握技巧:
  
   (1)注意篇章结构,合理布局
  
  开始部分(opening paragraph)——说出文中的要点、核心问题。
  
  正文部分(body paragraphs)——围绕主题开展叙述、讨论。
  
  结尾部分(concluding paragraphs)——对全文的总结和概括。
  
  要做到全文中心突出、段落之间必须是有机地联系,内容完整、连贯。前后呼应,祛除与主题无关的内容.
  
  (2)确定主题句
  
  主题句是对全文的概括,是文章的主旨。它能在文章中起到“画龙点睛”的作用。通常主题句出现在一篇文章的开头,而后,全文对主题句所提出的内容进行解释,扩展。
  
  写主题句应注意以下几点:
  
  ①归纳出你要写的文章的几个要点
  
  ②提炼出一句具有概括性的话
  
  ③主题句应具有可读性,抓住、吸引读者。
  
  
  
  (二)巧用连接词
  
  要想使文章有整体性、连贯性,就要学会正确使用连接词
  
  表示罗列增加
  
  first, second, third,
  
  first, then / next, after that / next, finally
  
  for one thing … for another…,
  
  on (the) one hand…on the other hand,
  
  besides / what’s more / in addition / furthermore / moreover / another / also,
  
  especially / in particular,
  
  表示时间顺序
  
  now, at present, recently,
  
  after, afterwards, after that, after a while, in a few days,
  
  at first, in the beginning, to begin with,
  
  later, next, finally,
  
  immediately, soon, suddenly, all of a sudden, at that moment, as soon as, the moment
  
  form now on, from then on,
  
  at the same time, meanwhile,
  
  till, not…until, before, after, when, while, as during,
  
  表示解释说明
  
  now, in addition, for example, for instance, in this case, moreover
  
  furthermore, in fact, actually
  
  表示转折关系
  
  but, however, while, though, or, otherwise, on the contrary, on the other
  
  hand, in contrast, despite, in spite of, even though, except (for), instead, of course, after all,
  
  表示并列关系
  
  or, and, also, too, not only … but also, as well as, both… and, either …or, neither …nor
  
  表示因果关系
  
  because, because of, since, now that, as, thanks to…, due to…, therefore, as a result (of), otherwise, so…that, such…that
  
  表示条件关系
  
  as (so) long as, on condition that, if, unless
  
  表示让步关系
  
  though, although, as, even if, even though, whether …or…, however, whoever,
  
  whatever, whichever, wherever, whenever, no matter how (who, what, which, where, when, whom)
  
  表示举例
  
  for example, for instance, such as…, take… for example
  
  表示比较
  
  be similar to, similarly, the same as, in contrast, compared with (to)…just like, just as,
  
  表示目的
  
  for this reason,, for this purpose, so that, in order to, so as to,
  
  表示强调
  
  in deed, in fact, surely, certainly, no doubt, without any doubt, truly,
  
  obviously, above all,
  
  表示概括归纳
  
  in a word, in short, in brief, on the whole, generally speaking, in my opinion, as far as i know, as we all know, as has been stated, as i have shown, finally, at last, in summary, in conclusion,
  
  (三)掌握常用句型:
  
  台湾英语资源网 http://www.esl.tw 里面有很多,下面只列举比较常用的。
  
  1. in order to
  
  为了实现他的梦想,他学习非常努力。
  
  he worked very hard in order to realize his dream.
  
  
  2. in order that
  
  她拼命干活以便到六点时把一切都准备就绪。
  
  she worked hard in order that everything would be ready by 6 o’clock..

      3. so…that
  
  他们太累了,除了伸懒腰什么都做不了了。
  
  they were all so tired that they could do nothing but yawn.
  
  4. such…that
  
  天气非常冷,以致于街上一个人都没有。
  
  it was such a cold day that there was nobody on the street.
  
  5. would rather do…than do
  
  他宁愿听他人讲而不愿自己说。
  
  he would rather listen to others than talk himself.
  
  6. prefer doing to doing
  
  他宁愿在精心准备后去做报告。
  
  he prefers making speeches after careful preparation.
  
  7. prefer to do…rather than do
  
  比起女人,男人总是宁可在家睡觉也不愿花那么多时间来购物。
  
  compared with women, men always prefer to sleep at home rather than spend so much time shopping.
  
  8. not only…but also
  
  在短短的三年的时间里她不但完成了所有课程,而且还获得了博士学位。
  
  in just three years, she had not only finished all the lessons, but also received her doctor’s degree.
  
  9. either…or
  
  如果考试过关,你可以买一个mp3或去云南玩一趟。
  
  you could either buy an mp3 or go to yunnan for a visit if you pass the exam.
  
  10. neither…nor
  
  他是一个无聊的人,既不爱娱乐,也不爱读书。
  
  he is a boring man. he likes neither entertainment nor reading.
  
  11. as well as
  
  他善良又乐于助人。
  
  he was kind as well as helpful.
  
  12. …as well
  
  这个小孩活泼又可爱。
  
  the child is active and funny as well.
  
  13. one…the other
  
  你看见桌子上有两只笔吗?一支是红色的,另一支是黑色的。
  
  have you seen two pens on the desk? one is red, the other is black.
  
  14. some…others
  
  每个人都很忙,有些在读书,有些在写作。
  
  everyone is busy in classroom. some are reading, others are writing.
  
  15. make…+adj /n
  
  我们所做的可以让世界更美丽。
  
  what we do will make the world more beautiful.
  
  16. not…until
  
  直到他告诉我发生的事,我才了解真相。
  
  i didn’t know the truth until she told me what happened.
  
  17. as if
  
  他夸夸其谈好像什么事都知道。
  
  he talks a lot as if he knows everything.
  
  18. it is no use (good) doing…
  
  假装不懂规则是行不通的。
  
  it’s no use pretending that you didn’t know the rules.
  
  19. find it + adj to do…
  
  我觉得作听力时有必要作笔记。
  
  i find it necessary to take down notes while listening.
  
  20. it is + time since…
  
  我已经有两年没见他了。
  
  it is two years since i last met him.
  
  21. it is + time when…
  
  我到电影院时已经八点钟了。
  
  it was 8 o’clock when i got to the cinema.
  
  22. it is + time before…
  
  不久我们就会再见面的。
  
  i won’t be long before we can meet again.
  
  23. it is…that…
  
  我最珍视的是友谊。
  
  it is friendship that i value most.
  
  24. it is + n / adj + that / to do…
  
  每个人都必须懂得如何使用计算机
  
  it is a must that everybody should know how to use computers.

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